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.:Ghoststar Giftart:.

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Ghostpaw turned his back to Oakpaw, ignoring his friend, and love interest. Oakpaw gaped her mouth, growling, then glaring at him. "Why do you boast of these things? You may be in role to be leader, but you can't just pretend you hate me! For StarClan's sake, I liked you! Can't you get that???" She growled, he glare meeting his turn. "I don't care for what you say anymore Oakpaw, I'm growing up, I'm going to be a Warrior, and soon Leader. Maybe in time, I'll like you..." He growled. Oakpaw snarled, baring her shiny fangs. "Well, if that's the case, I guess I'll leave you be until then..." She growled, turning and sprinting away from him with hatred.

Yes I forgot his scars, I won't be able to fix it though.

Time: 17 Hours
Programs Used: Paint Tool Sai, GIMP 2.6, MS Paint
Characters: Ghoststar, Oakheart

Ghoststar belongs to *DracKeagan
Oakheart belongs to =Natasha-83
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is so gorgeous! <3 The stance and anatomy is very good, and it can convey the emotions you need to. The shading and color reflection is brilliant compared to your other works. The sky and clouds are adorable, and realistic. Aside from all these pros, I have a few cons. The lens flare is very heavy, and you should tone down the opacity more. The grass is obviously done with a preset brush, and I suggest you do the grass freehand so you don't get that heavily patterned look, seeing that grass is natural and it sprouts very randomly. The tree in the background could use more shading and depth, and again, do your leaves freehand. To do grass and trees, there are very good tutorials here on deviantart. There are many background and tree tutorials by =griffsnuff and several grass tutorials by other artists. But other than minor background issues, I really love this drawing. Nice work!